October assessment learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

Q1. correct 

Q2. wrong no feedback 

Q3. Nothing to do with the advert in this question 

Q4. Not specific 

Q5. More about font size and colour 

Q6. no feedback 

Q7. Not relevant

Q8. Not quite

Q9. poor way to begin an answer analyse water aid advert in more detail

total mark:4/25   Grade: U

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question:

Q1: 1 mark

Q2: 0 marks

Q3: 0 marks

Q4: 0 marks

Q5: 1 mark

Q6: 1 mark

Q7: 1 marks

Q8: 0 marks

Q9: 0 marks

3) Did you get any media terminology wrong in the assessment? Make a note of it here for future revision:

Yes i think

4) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question?

Q5 because of how i explained what the film poster is about.

5) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question?

The 'briefly explain' Questions.

6) Re-draft your answer to Q9 and type it out in full. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure your typed re-draft is a top-level answer of at least three paragraphs. 

● Excellent knowledge and understanding of the
theoretical framework, demonstrated by
consistently effective explanation of why
advertisers use children.

● Consistently appropriate and effective
reference to the Water Aid advert.

● Consistently appropriate and effective use of
media terminology throughout.